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Dispel action page 2 by ~ChrissyDelk:iconChrissyDelk:

Categories Cartoons & Comics > Traditional Media > Comics > Pages

©2008-2009 ~ChrissyDelk
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Page 2 of Need More Action Pages.

Inked with multiliners and toned in Manga Studio Pro.

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~comixink Feb 20, 2008, 1:22:37 PM
This is awesome work, the two pages you've got so far look great. I have a critique for ya though, in the first panel where the dog beast is leaping in the air his font legs are wrong. The bone structure doesn't quite work that way. Imagine a lightning bolt shape for the femur, radius and ulna, and then where the metatarsals start will be where his "wrist" bends. The first part of the lightning bolt will be where the biggest muscle mass is, which you are missing here in this drawing. Use some refrence, get pics of a dog jumping or something.

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Although nature commences with reason and ends in experience it is necessary for us to do the opposite, that is to commence with experience and from this to proceed to investigate the reason.
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~ChrissyDelk Feb 20, 2008, 1:33:24 PM
Thanks for the critique. I was so sick drawing this page I was just happy it looked like a dog. Lamest excuse ever when the truth is that I need to get me to a zoo and draw animals in action more.

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~comixink Feb 20, 2008, 1:58:23 PM
Its hard to get animals in action at zoos, best place for that is just photo reference. if you were still around I could have given you my massive animal ref folder!

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Although nature commences with reason and ends in experience it is necessary for us to do the opposite, that is to commence with experience and from this to proceed to investigate the reason.
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~ChrissyDelk Feb 20, 2008, 2:07:11 PM
I love reference and am saddened I can't get more. I do use ref, just sometimes lack of knowledge, illness and deadlines get in the way of fixing things to 100%. It's sad, but true.
Plus, I'm obstinate. When I have an angle and composition chosen, nothing, lack of exact angle or beastie is gonna stop from drawing it where I want. Even when I should and it would save a lot of heartache.

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~comixink Feb 20, 2008, 2:37:07 PM
excuses excuses! XD

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Although nature commences with reason and ends in experience it is necessary for us to do the opposite, that is to commence with experience and from this to proceed to investigate the reason.
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~ChrissyDelk Feb 20, 2008, 2:39:34 PM
I'm a class A whiner today.

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*angichan Mar 14, 2008, 10:07:36 PM
the venus fly trap wants my soul!!!
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~ChrissyDelk Mar 14, 2008, 10:17:42 PM
Feed me, Seymour!

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*angichan Mar 22, 2008, 7:29:50 AM
AAHHHHH! i need ta find that thing on DVD...*hunts*
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