hamzapecenkovicFeatured By OwnerFeb 20, 2008Professional Traditional Artist
This is awesome work, the two pages you've got so far look great. I have a critique for ya though, in the first panel where the dog beast is leaping in the air his font legs are wrong. The bone structure doesn't quite work that way. Imagine a lightning bolt shape for the femur, radius and ulna, and then where the metatarsals start will be where his "wrist" bends. The first part of the lightning bolt will be where the biggest muscle mass is, which you are missing here in this drawing. Use some refrence, get pics of a dog jumping or something.
I love reference and am saddened I can't get more. I do use ref, just sometimes lack of knowledge, illness and deadlines get in the way of fixing things to 100%. It's sad, but true. Plus, I'm obstinate. When I have an angle and composition chosen, nothing, lack of exact angle or beastie is gonna stop from drawing it where I want. Even when I should and it would save a lot of heartache.